RuPaul’s Drag Race Season 4 - Best Moments : Latrice Royale
my queen
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The greatest bacon costume of 1894
015!! halfway!!
it’s been raining and storming for like 3 or 4 days straight now, so … yeah. coat is/is based on these beauties ….
Some big and a lot less big details from Oosaka, mechanical pencil on the back of postcards. I found the metropol and all the corners and dirty parts and modern parts and pretty much everything of the street view fascinating, and took seemingly useless photos wherever I went. Here’s how I ended up using them, then.
(I’ll post detail shots later when I get some taken!)
YES. THIS IS PANDA.
So I went out to eat tonight, with my fam for my grandpa’s birthday, and I was ridiculously attracted to the waiter. He looked like he was in his mid 30s? maybe. BUT GODDAMN WAS HE EVER HAWT. Ohhhman, and he smiled everytime he looked at you
because he is a waiter at a swanky restaurantand…
NEVAR REGRET
OMG I DID IT I FUCKING KILLED IT I COMPLETELY ROCKED MY STORY HOLY SHIT PEOPLE LAUGHED AND THEY TOLD ME IT WAS AWESOME AND THE TA I WORKSHOPPED WITH WAS SO PROUD OF ME
AND MEL HOLY SHIT MEL
THE GUY WHO PLAYED MR KNIGHTLEY HAPPENED TO BE THERE…AND HE COMPLIMENTED ME LAKWKLAJLAJW HOLY SHIT ATTRACTIVE AND TALENTED PEOPLE LIKED MY PERFORMANCE OKAY I CAN DIE HAPPY NOW.
I am proud. ♥
Hello all~ I need some extra pairs of eyes to look through my short story. I’d love any and all feedback! Thanks a ton, this is due tomorrow and I still have my reflective essay to write for it. Speaking of which, if any of you also know some good authors who either wrote or discussed workshopping stories please let me know! -smooches for all-
It’s a cute story! I’m sorry I don’t have time to help much at all as I’m studying for finals, but I noticed that there are one or two places where you change verb tenses. One of them is in the paragraph with:
Both sons are stiff and formal, boring. His daughter on the other hand is fake and annoying with her words being the opposite of his ex but the meaning the same.
and another time in:
He never taught them differently though, so he let out a snort and decided he doesn’t fucking care.
This was one section I had a little trouble understanding:
Having to put up with the visits and the whole circus of telling people you have the c-word gave him a headache and actually pleaded to God or whoever to kill him faster. He was for once surprised, because maybe the Big Guy was listening. Which arose for Arthur a dilemma he never thought he had to face. Being let down.
I think you forgot a word somewhere? The section might read better if you split the first sentence into two. Also, “Which arose for Arthur a dilemma he never though he had to face” is not a complete sentence. Maybe you could say something like “Arthur was faced with something he had never thought he would have to deal with: being let down.”
Actually, after rereading the paragraph again, I think part of my confusion comes from the fact that he was praying that he would die faster, but when the doctor tells him his wish has come true it’s referred to as “being let down.” I’m honestly not trying to be a smart ass or anything. D:
Anyway, I have to get back to studying, sorry I couldn’t be more of a help.
